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假如你是李明，你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。
3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。
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Dear Paul, I quite sympathize with you and understand great trouble you are suffering from.So,I have some advices with you. First,you can ask teacher or classmater with this trouble and I believe they will give some good advices.Second,don,t worry achievement in the test,you should think more where you make a successed,give youself more confident.Finally，you should do some sports,not only it benifit to your body,but also relax your mind.wish you make a Progressive . best wishes!
