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Some people think inviting large foreign companies to set up factories in developing countries is helpful for local economy, while others think that the foreign companies should not be allowed to build their factories in developing countries, instead, local companies should be encouraged in order to develop local economy. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.
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It is a common phenomena that the emering countries and districts have appealed foreign corpatations to built product line there and benefited a lot scince they can learn how to operate business from the alien company which have provided a great many occupations for local people as well. Hence, Inviting large foreign companies can boost the development of developing countries. Advanced international companies always have long histories that can stem from and accumulated abundant of experience which may have been developed into series of oparating rules ,quite precious for mordern industy .Therefore the local industy can absort the good perspection and apply it to the local company which can develop more quickly . Most of the foreign companies employ local people and give a higher salary than local companies do, which plays an important role of maintaining the harmony of local society. As a conclusion, inviting foreign companie inspire the local economy and promote the level of local living life.
