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it is widely acknowledge that nowadays more and more cars coming into our familes,we are happy thai it has greately improved our life.but unfortunately,it has also brought ,any problems ,such has heavy traffic and traffic accidents.as the middle schol student,what we should do we shpould obey the traffic rules and walk the crosswalk when crosssing the road.we should not play on the road and play the footable.we should persuade the parents not to grink and drive. as u know ,there are a number of reasons for the increase of cars.
