2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦89:理想家园

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my ideal home is very large.,there are at least twenty rooms.there are 3 layer.the frist layer are computer room and study. there is a big library on my study wih millions of books in it. i tink it is an abundant resources of infomation on all subjects.the bedroom in the 3 floor.there are a bib balcony in it.enery morning i can see many beautiful scenery from the balcony.in front of the house there is aa big gurden.