2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦89:理想家园

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My dream home is very large. There are at least twenty rooms . It has three floors . There’s a computer room and a study on the ground floor .The bedroom is on the second floor .It has a big balcony . There’s a garden in front of the house . I like it very much .I hope you can come to my dream home to play with me .