托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

I totally agree with the saying "One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older." Firstly,the knowledge that we have learned is just fit our current ages,it means that following the time,we have to improve and renew our knowledge.Thus, we can live up to the level of world requiring.Additionally，continuing to learn is quite an extraordinary way to keep yourself from descending to the old and help you solve these terrible issues smartly and wisely.Furthermore，undoubtedly knowledges do broad our horrizon and lead us to a brilliant direction. My perspective is not only in accordence with the saying,but also I insist on observing this saying.And I call for more people will join us to learn until your death.