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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3526
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文章词汇使用比较恰当,学术词汇积累不足;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

I totally agree with the saying "One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older." Firstly,the knowledge that we have learned comforms to our present ages,it means that following the time,we have to improve and update our knowledge so that we can keep pace with the speed of society.Additionally,continuing to learn is quite an extraordinary way to prevent your minds from descending to blank ones and help you solve these terrible issues smartly and wisely. Furthermore,undoubtedly knowledge does broad our horizon and lead us to a brilliant prosperity. My perspective is not only in accordance with the saying,but also I'm willing to insist on complying with this saying.And I call for more men to join us to learn until your death.

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