雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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It is once a blue moon for people in the past times to travel abroad while today more and more people choose to spend their holidays to travel to other countries.But with the popularity of this phenomenon,arguments are appeared. There is no doubt that people can broaden their horizons and rich lives by traveling,at the same time,tourism is getting promising.However,prosperous tourism does does damage on local life and break down eco-system. Frankly speaking,this kind of development whose positive effects can kill the negative effects contributes a lot to human beings.the most distinguish effect ,in my view,is that it provide a platform for the exchangment of different cultures.Of course,the bad effectives such as the damage to environment can't be neglected.