2012年12月英语三级作文真题附范文(江苏)

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Dear David, Many thanks for your previous order. As for transport, I would like to suggest that we use paper boxes instead of wooden ones. In our recent transactions with other parters, primarily from the US, we chose paper boxes which had been proved more cost saving and transport convenient. Our paper boxes are water proof and work well even in the rainy days. Please let me know if you are agree with the method, so that we could dispatch the shirts asap. Regards Hai Wang Sales Manager