假设你是某公司销售助理王海,请给David Smith先生写一封回信,内容包括:
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫;
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运,并列举纸箱的优点;你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱,效果很好;
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Dear David Smith
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Dear David, We are thanks for you order 100 boxes shirt. At for transport, I would like to suggest that carton is more convenient than wooden boxes. In our recent transactions from the US, we chose carton boxes which had been proved more cost saving and transport convenient. Please let me know if you are agree with the method. Best regards, Hai wang sale manager
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