2012年12月英语三级作文真题附范文(江苏)

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Dear David smith, I am sales assistant of HG company, we are thanks for you have ordered the 100 boxes of shirt from us. At the transport, I would like to suggest that shirts are better to packaged and shipped with cartons rather than wooden cases. Carton enjoys many advantages. For instance, being light and lover cost. We have also used cartons to package shirt when trading with order America company recently and result was quiet well. Looking forward to you reply ASSP. Sincerely yours, Hai Wang