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复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
My hometown laded in ChongQing , and there are countless interesting places , then I will choose some classical to introduce to her . ChongQing is famous for hot-pot , and many hot-pot shops are here and there. First of all , I will take her to have a taste of hot-pot . It's really delicious , I do believe that she wil love it ChongQing was the second capital , and there are some places related to war of resistance , such as ZaZi dong , Gele montains . I'll take her to these places and tell her the China's history and Chinese's love for country before ,now and future. Foreigner's Town is well-known in CQ , there are many foreign things , and maybe she would love to have a look to avoid acacia bitter . I love my hometown , I love the food , the accent and so on. In my eyes , it's beautiful , and everywhere is interesting , Welcome to ChongQing.
