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句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
When it comes to happiness, most of us would think of the absence of problems. While we neglect the fact that our ability to deal with problems is the real happiness.We inenvitably meet all kinds of problems in our lifetime and that means no one could never met problems.Should we feel happy if we have not run into problem for temporary? The answer is absolutely no.When we work hard to tackle with problem,we put all heart to try to correct things right,we try different ways to make the final decision,we could really get dipped into the feeling of happiness.When we recognize we have the ability to face any problem, truly happiness is undertood.
