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When it comes to happiness, most of us would think of the absence of problems. While we neglect the fact that our ability to deal with problems is the real happiness.We inevitably encounter all kinds of problems in our lifetime and that means no one could never has problems.Should we feel happy if we have not run into problem on temporary? The answer is absolutely no.When we work hard to tackle with problem,we put all heart to try to correct things right,we try different ways to make the final decision,we could really get dipped into the feeling of happiness.When we recognize we have the ability to face any problem, truly happiness is understood.
