2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is a so beautiful place .There is many places have a long history .For example ,XIAOZIQIAO is a long bridge,it be used to two apart.Many people come to chaozhou to visit xiaoziqiao.so I would take her to see xiaoziqiao. On the other hand ,i would take her visit my university .it also has many history and it so beautiful.