2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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With the science developing ，Mobile phone become more and more popular in our daily life and there are increasing number of people using mobile phone . through it people can have a conversation with their families and friends easily .not only they can surf the internet to study but also they can relax themselves by listening music or watching movies . however . everything has their coins ,due to the mobile phone universal causing the relationship between people terribly .a number of people overuse mobile phone .they always use it all the day .you can see people use mobile phone anywhere and anytime . whatever morning or evening .even eating to sleeping . so overusing mobile phone has a very bad influence on everyone .first what is known to all is that overusing is bad for our eyes which causing us become a myopia .then some students surf the internet by using mobile phone causing them falling grades and some people look through bad information on the mobile phone as far as i am concerned ,we should mobile phone reasonable .