2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中用词稍显贫乏；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

"Where there is a will,there is a way"Everyone knows it's a truth which can encourage us to be succeeded. First,a strong will is the important part to success.Often a strong will lies in the quick actions and the consistent words.It is the strong will that led to a courage heart.Owing to this,only people who with the strong will can achieve great task.It's the permanent truth to those who want to be successful.So it is with the study.Unless we study hard,we won't be the pillars of the community. Nothing succeeds without a strong will.