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Mar. 25th, 2008 sunday fine This morning, I got up early. After breakfast,I helped mom with housework. Then i did my homework. The homework was very interesting, So i did it well.In the afternoon, I played table tennis with my friend LingLing, We enjoyed ourselves very much. In the evening i watched tv with my parents and then prepared my self for the next day's lesson. What a busy day today!