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【题目要求】
It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.【题目分析】
教育是百年大计(a fundamental task crucial for generations to come)，当然要同意。社区的孩子就近上学很方便，减少了路上可能发生交通事故的可能性; 可以提高社区文化氛围(将有更多的书店，音像店); 进而促进社区经济繁荣;提高就业率等等。尽管社区可能变得嘈杂一些，但是总体上还是应该支持的。文章词汇表达做的很好，但单词拼写要认真；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the rapidly developing society whose advancement provides endless refulgent possibilities for citizenry,various resources including educational resources which in the past were enbridles in inaccessible ivory towers, have broken their own blockage,stepping into communities,family and personal utility.Obviously,some experts have come up with many suggestions,such as establishing a high school in communities,and as result of reflecting with this kind of novelty,the authority has announced that a new high school will be built in my community.Personally thinking,the policy is truly positive and could bring untold benefits to our residents.And I will enumerate them,as following. Firstly,according to philosophical points,knowledge is the most egalitarian all over the globe,thus enabling everyone,be it farmers or workers,the poor or the rich,to touch truth of the universe and to obtain the conducive instruments.In the past,schooling is the only way to accept education and the only place where people can purchase lore and ken,but now what the construction of the new high school will bring,is to grant more channels for citizens who have the ambition to continue their process of being fond with knowledge. Secondly,that the students living in our community could arrive at school more conveniently is perhaps the most illustrous advantage of the announcement.Apparently if the school can offer high-quality staff and comprehensive infrastructrue,students can in large measure heighten their efficiency,by curtailing the distence between home and school and then saving time. Thirdly,from the economic prospective,the construction can achieve several short-term and long-term goals.For one thing,the establishment of a new architecture,will propel the manufacture industry through utilizing raw material and indusrial product,and will nudge the optimization of labor market through employing workers,thus making the construction play a crucial role tocatalyze economic development.Then,the sustainable development will form a self-circulatory system where more demand from students and staff will be induced.Therefore,the new school could probably accomplish a skyrockety increment for economy. In conclusion,the policy that a new high school will be built is truly advisable,whose reasons have been illustrated by above points.As expensive as it could be in the incipient stage,I do think that the high school will indemnify with countless benefits undoubtably.
