作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
We aiways say that if one thing is not be seen or heard clearly we can not make a conclusion quikly . In my opioion,some thing are not very simple,people may not understand the truth at the story‘s back.For example,When a movie star is going to propagate his new movie,his company always make some gossip to grasp people's attention,that's boring.
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