2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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We are supposed to have a better life as time goes,but we have to face the fact that the quality of life in large cities is sinking. The reason that caused this phenomenon are various.The dominant reason is the blooming industry,A great deal of wasted water and air is having huge destruction to our environment which causes a lack of fresh air and food.The second reason is fast-pace life style which makes a greatest of people can't get enough time to break,so people feel tired both physically and mentally.last reason is people'demand for substance such as house,car and money is reaching a crazy situation,hence some people neglect something small but beautiful around us. The solution to the blooming industry ,i think ,is to improve the system which deals with wasted water and air,government should even ban laws to force factories to fulfill their duties.As for fast-pace,maybe having realized the negative effects,people now are advocating slow-pace style that is a good idea that we should have a try.At last,the solution to the crazy chase is keeping a reasonable brain and at the same time we can transfer focus by cultivating other interest.