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Sowing the seeds, nurturing growth and harvesting the rewards We are all of the universal and ordianary person, although there are also specially gifted and talented one borned , most of us should sowing the seeds, after we have been born such as being well-educated and various kinds of cultivation. And then having been nurturing growth, we can harvest the rewards at last. Here are several reasons to support the above ideas, opionion. First of all, the general rules of nature is really applied to our daily life. Sowing the seeds
