2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of the Internet, Online shopping becomes more popular than shopping in real life. There are many advantages of Online shopping, such as it takes less time and energy for people to choose clothes.And it also can easily find out the cheapest clothes.However,Online shopping also has some disadvantages. It cannot make people get the real quality and metiral. I think we should try to make a good use of the advantages of Online shopping and make good considerations before choosing to buy.