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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Dear editor, I'm writing to talk about the phenomenon happened to students before exams. As we all know,students want to get good grades.But some students stay up late.If they can't sleep well,they will have to sleep in class.What a stupid behavior it is.so I do hope you can advise them to have a good sleep before exams.Only in this way are they bound to get good grades. And I think they shoud make a good arrangement to review what they learn before. I hope my suggestions can help them and send my best wishes to them.thanks for you kind consideration.Hope to hear from you soon.
