托福独立写作模拟题:关于金钱

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We all know the importance of money in today's society. However, what does the money really mean to us? Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money. They think the more money they have, the better life they can live. What's more, they think their happiness depend on the money they earn. Nevertheless, others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. They hold the point that money is only a tool for exchanging materials. Having a pleasing life is more significant. In my opinion, I prefer the second view of money. Money is not eveything. It is ture that we cannot live without money today, but we have heard that money cannot bring us love, friendship and health and I think these are more important than money. If I do not have a healthy body, what are the amounts of money for? If I am very wealthy, but no relatives and friends stand by me, will I feel happy? On the contrary, although I am not rich, with my fitness, I can enjoy many things in my future life. I can spend my time with my parents, my husbend and my children. I believe that a person's biggest happiness is to have a complete family and family members enjoy good health. In conclusion, money will come and go. Only the life we have is the most important thing. Everyone should treature the life they live.