题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
More and more computer are used in day work or our lifes. We could listen music, watch movie, read the news and office work and so on. The applicaiton of computer take great convenience to us and increase the efficiency. But we should take look at the both side of the influences of computer. The computer will give some bad effects on every one if you can not control yourself when you are using computer. It will occupy most of your time, impaire your vision ability and your health, if your spend much of time on computer. At the same time, we must adimt that the computer take lot of entertainments to us that is not exist before: we could contact our friends by e-mail or QQ tool convenicently; we could get the news we want know by internet, we could learn english, or other knowedges, etc. However, we should understand that the computer is only a tool in our life, some works are expected to do with computer, but others should by ourself. In conclusion, we could not relay on the function of computer entirely.