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①温州是一个美丽的城市，位于中国的东部（in eastern China），气候温暖（warm）, 准备轻便的衣服。（light clothes）②有很多美丽的风景，比如雁荡山（Yandang Moutains）和南麂岛（Nanji Island）等。③ 靠近大海，可以品尝海鲜（seafood）④交通方便⑤这里的人很友好,并且你很愿意做她的导游。
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Dear Nancy, I am very glad that you will spent your holiday in Wenzhou for next Spring Festival. Wenzhou is a beautiful city that located in Eastern China. It has a warm weather, so you can prepare some light clothes. I am sure that you will like living in the city that near the sea. There are plenty of mountains around the city, such as Yandang Mountains, Nanji Island, and so on. Thanks for nearing the seashore, there are verious freshing seafood that you can have a taste, and the Traffiic is good. Most of people are very friendly and I am pleasure to have fun with as a guide. Yours May
