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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17430
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Computer and Man In the age of high-technology,we people connect more with computers,and this phenomenon has been bought us a great many effects. For one thing,computer is benefit to our life.In the start,it make us convinent.We can do lots of things in the Internet which can really save our time and money such as going shopping,booking tickets,ordering things and so on.Second,from the net we can find many attractive and interesting things.For example,we watch so many good soap oparas,movies and we can listen to some beautiful songs.At the same time,we can aquire lots of resourses that are helpful to our study.The last but not the least,computer can change our way to make friends so that it also changes our way to live a life.Nowadays,we can easily make friends from all over the world,no matter where he comes from,and no matter which region he faith in. However,every coin has two sides.Although computer has many things good for our human-beings,it also bring some bad influnce.Computer make people become lazier and lazier by shopping and playing series of computer-things,which are actually harm to people's health.Then,computer can also make people especially teenagers not concentrated on their study but on the computer games.Besides,people may lack of face-to-face communication and the society will become lifeless and spiritless. In conclusion,computer is a double-edged sword,it has a profound effect on us.So,it's imparetive for us to treat the connection between computer and man.

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