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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong will A strong will is essential for people to get successful,and we can't make it without strong will. Edison,the famous American scientist,who invented electric light bulb.He had failed millions of times before he did it,however he never gave it up,and with a strong will he eventually made it.Yes, he is great,and now all of us may benifit from this. It is obvious that the person with a strong will will do a great job. Everybody is possible to succeede as the same as Edison,as long as we have equal will as Edison. Things' going the same way while studying,students also should have a strong will for studying.We will never be a useful people if we don't study hard.