2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear David, Welcome to my hometown,a beautiful city in Shandong province——Taian.This is a fantastic city,located in the bottom of Mountain Tai.You must heard about Mountain Tai,where are full of many trees and special shape of stone.If you come to Taian someday,you couldn't miss the scenic picture by climbing mountain. And secondly,Taian have many amusement parks,like Fangte happy world,the sun tribe,etc.I believed you will fall in love with them.Some games in those parks are very thrilling,but also exciting.Would you want to try falling down from 30 meter?Would you want to experience flying in the sky?If your answer is yes,you could come to these amusement parks,it will not disappoint you. Well,there are many scence in Taian,I just introduced some famous scenic spots to you.I hope it can help you to know where to go. Good wishes. Your friend, Mary