在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
i am from China, i have a good frend. She is a clever gril. I think she is a good people. She is good at dance . When she dances ,I often singing at the same time. I love her so much, We usually study togeter. She is good at English,So She always help me to study it. I an very happy that i have a great frend.