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【题目要求】
Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
【写作分析】
第一段：看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动，有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段：看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段：适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识，和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段：适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目，并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展，否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；可适当增加从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Whatching TV is very important for children extra activities.TV is addicted bymany children. watching TV has many cons.First is unhealthy.Children always stay on the sofa and do not move for a long time.the children who like watching TV also spend more time on TV than communicate with families.second,it is bad for their intelligent improvement.and also some TV programs are bad for the children. but one coin has two sides.adequate option of TV shows is good for children developing.it is can improve their knowledge,make them have a interest to explore the world.and it will enrich their daily life.watching TV with families and friends benifit to communicate with them. .adequate option of TV shows,and watching TV with families and friends is good for development in healthy,or it will have negative effects.
