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2006年专四作文真题:存钱

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:27浏览次数:1981
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题目 My Idea of Saving Money
说明 Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi'an Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing, and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better, what do you think?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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A Recent survey shows that students' attitude towards saving money divides into two sides.More than half of the students think it is a worthwhile stuff while the rest denies this point of view.And in my opinion,I'm totally convinced that saving money can benefit us a lot.The reasons which can definitely support my idea can be listed as follows. On the one hand,saving money enables us to form a good habit,which helps us cultivate the consiousness of saving.For example,if you manage to save money,you will find the possibilities of waste slash and you can have a own savings.Saving money can help you not spend your money in a casual and unplanned way,and you will treasure your money much more. On the other hand,saving money can help you prepare for a rainy day.You can never know when the sudden accidents will happen,so it is better to prepare for it in advance.Therefore,saving money provide you with an secret safe,which always awaits to offer fuel in snowy weather. All in all,saving money not only can help you form a good habit,but also can help you out of trouble in some unexpected conditions.Thus,everyone should formulate a plan to save money.

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