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希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；从句数量不足；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
cancda is ertremely beautiful city.it is a place of great beauty.i really want togo the place.the geographical is covers a vast and on three sides and the south is american.there aremany islands and costal inslands.the west and east are moist.the south is warm.the northis cold.the water and electricity and forest and mineral ,such as moal oil and gas tas have much rich.industry focus on south .the translation is developed.crops conrert on wheat and wheat.i maintain that canada is financially able to do so thanks to the economiic boom
