2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

nowadays , a wave of advertising sems to sweep over the whole socirty.it can be seen everywhere in our daily lives.every year,millions of people watching the advertising in the tv in order to get the infomation about the products which is suits for them.at the same time throufg the advertising they can get the lastes news on all walk s of life. people disagree greagree greately about advertising.supporters argue that it is wrong to through the ad get the infomation.some ad is false and are all bogus news and misstand people to buy the product.it is true that some products are risky and dangers . some ad sounds great but the physical is false.opponents of ad contain that ad may let us obtain much more information. obviously ,ad should not be completely rejected.peole have the right to see and use the ad when it necessaty,but they also need to realize that ad is not always a quick fix for thier phyical problem