2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

With the development of science and technology,the number of the people using moblephone is arising,however,is it really good to us? As we can see,in the picture,some people are crossing the street looking at their cell phone and using walking sticks in order to see.Obviously,it's dangerous On the one hand,the phone is useful for our daily life.On the other hand,we can't have a good life if we overuse it. there are a lot of bad consequences of overuse it,and I'll give some classical.Firstly and the most importantly,we will have less time with my families and friends face to face.Secondly,it's bad to your eyes.And thirdly,it's dangerous that looking at cell phone while crossing the street. No matter what,we should use the phone properly.