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I have a good friend.Her name is Lily.She is a beautiful girl.She has smell eyes,long black hair.She is tall,and thin.We live near,so we often go to school and go home together.We always help with each other.Such as,she can help me with my math,and I can help her with her English.After school,we always play and do homework together.I like her very much.