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I have a dog. Its name is DuDu.It's very fat.It is nine years old. It is a white dog.Its eyes are clearly,just lake a mirror.It is shrot,but lovely. I often play with it after school,and I also talk with it with ''WoWo!''I tried to teach it to speak English,but it even can't speak Chinese!I felt angry,but love it ,too.