你听说过Earth Hour这项活动吗?今年的Earth Hour你中如何度过的?请你写一篇题为“My Earth Hour 2011”的短文。
4. 号召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活动中来。
2. 语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
My Earth Hour 2011 The Earth Hour was from 8:30pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. This year,I participle in an extraordinary activity named Earth Hour,which means a lot for me.It is my love that contributes to me taking part. As for me,my friends with me shared a excellent day.Firstly,we collected the batteries that really dose harm to the soil.In addition,we used the time doing some beneficial things.