新东方托福高分作文:独自出行还是和朋友一起?

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With the rapidly developing economy which provides more possibilities of leisure and entertainment,people can enjoy more freedom to travel to the wilderness,fluorescent cities and overseas states.Subsequently,some people would like to travel with a companion,thus sharing the memorable time with friends,family or colleagues,but other people love travelling alone to explore strange environment.As for my choice,I would like to travel with a companion,and truly I think that there are several cogent reasons about my option. First of all,from the perspective of security,travelling with a companion can in large degree guarantee my security.Be it the beauty of landscape,the charming culture or the friendly stangers-security is the principal factor on which must be focused.With a companion,I can have extra warrant,becuse if we meet some dangers including natrual disasters,criminals and exigency,we can help each other by providing a hand,or keeping alert. Furthermore,in the process of travelling together,we can achieve a closer relationship through eating together,visiting resorts together and having fun together.For instance,in the term of my experience,I have made many friends more intimate by an excursion.Also,through the reciprocal collaboration,we can form the sence of team spirit and the awareness of cooperation,which are extremely significant in modern society. Finally,in many travelling plans made by adolescents,what is of magnitude in the decision is the consideration of financial element.Obviously,when I travel with a companion,I can share the food,the restaurant and the hotel with my companion.Therefore,both of us can save money by bifurcating the cost,and at the same time,the enjoyable experience will not be discounted.Although the fiscal factor could be of little importance,sometimes the fuction could be influential in someone who has the desire to travel but not the plenty of financial support to affrod it. In conclusion,above factors are the main reasons which I think are superior to travelling alone.Granted,travelling alone could be conducive for establishing bravery and independent ability.Travelling with a companion is my preferrance.