小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a nine years old black dog named Dodo. He is very fat and lovely. Dodo always get up as early as me in the morning. He always accompany with me when I go out to do morning exercise. When I come back from work in the evening, he used to pick me up at the gate. He is the best friend of mine.