小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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Dodo is a black nine years old black dog. He is a little bit fat but very active and lovely. Every moring, Dodo always gets up earlier than me. I can see his blue eyes in the dark. After I dress up, he runs to me and play with me for 5 to 10 minutes. The he usually accompany with me goes out to do morning exercise. When I come back from work in the evening, he used to pick me up at the gate. He is the best friend of mine.He also is one of the most important member of my family.