小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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Dodo is a black dog aged nine. He is a little bit fat but very active and lovely. Every morning, Dodo always gets up earlier than me. I can see his blue eyes in my bed. It seems very bright in the darkness. After I dress up, he runs to me and play with me for 5 to 10 minutes. Then he usually accompany with me goes out to do morning exercise. When we come back home, he has breakfirst at the garden. He can eat as mach as what you give him. In the evening, he used to pick me up at the gate. He is the best friend of mine.He also is one of the most important member of my family.