小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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Dodo is a black dog aged nine. He is a little bit fat but very active and lovely. Every morning, Dodo always gets up earlier. He stays at the door and watches at me. When I open my eyes, I can see his loverly blue eyes is looking at me in my bed. It very bright in the darkness, Seems his is waiting for me. After I dress up, he runs to me and play with me for 5 to 10 minutes. Then he usually accompany with me goes out to do morning exercise. When we come back home, he has breakfast at the garden. He can eat as mach as what you give him. In the evening, he used to pick me up at the gate. He love play with me. From all above, you may know understand what Dodo is for me. He is one of my best friend.He also is one of the most important member of my family.