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With the rapidly developing society where provides more various choices to enjoy entertainment and jollity,the authority has recently announced that a new theater may be built in our community.Consequently,many residents reject the proposal by arguing that the construction of the new movie theater will disturb the noemal life in the community.But there are also a large number of citizens supporting this policy.Personally thinking,as a undergraduate equiped with economic knowledge and social science,I think that building a new movie theater will bring multifaceted benefits. First of all,the construction of a new architecture will create massive demands for building material such as woods,stone and sands,for workers to establish the architecture,and for designation plan originated by art companies.Thus,from the perspective of economy,all of them will assimilate the superfluous products in industry,manufacture and labor market.And,subsequently,it could be beneficial for combatting with the unemployment problem,and for keeping companies' reasonable profits to continually operate.In other words,the construction of the new theater will nudge the economic development. Furthermore,the theater will offer a comfortable place for residents to have fun and rest.Residents can go to watch films in the evening,after daily workload and stress,conveniently.Moreover,the entire family can go there together,sharing the common enjoyable time,thus making the relationship among members closer and happier.And with the public site for residents whose interests or habits are relatively identical,they can more conveniently interact and communicate reciprocally. Finally,the new architecture built in the community will embellish the platitudinous community where almost every house or apartment has the same style of decoration and exterior scene.Certainly,the new movie theater must be designated so carefully,deliberately and laboriously that the new building will be a picturesque resort in our community.Notwiststanding the building do not need to be spectacular,I believe that it will be at least a charming point. In conclusion,on the basis of above three reasons,I support the policy of the construction of a new movie theater.By virtue of its functional consideration,i.e.economic motivation,public resort and refulgent decoration,I hold the idea that the construction of the theater will bring numerous advantages to our community.
