你听说过Earth Hour这项活动吗?今年的Earth Hour你中如何度过的?请你写一篇题为“My Earth Hour 2011”的短文。
4. 号召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活动中来。
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My Earth Hour 2011 The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was a pity that I didn't realize it was Earth Hour until I watched the news on TV. At that time. I was shopping at the mall. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example.,I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doing so. Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year. I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.