2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent Nowadays,many children are facing a serious problem,and they are limited by their parents about kinds of aspects.Most parents hold the view that what they have done is good for children,however,is it really benefit their kids? As far as I'm concerd,parents should give more spare time to children,and try to trust them.They're afraid that we may get hurt，but only have done something can we really know about it,and we should have a vision of future.If we failed now by ourselves,we won't fell down again next.Maybe it's not bad for us to go throngh something terrible. What can parents do to help children to be independent?It's not very hard.There are some tips may be help.Firstly,parents should stop overconcerning,and let children take measures to make it.Secondly,trust them and give them enough time and space.Thirdly,parents should teach them to be aware of independence,and give some useful advices