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①温州是一个美丽的城市，位于中国的东部（in eastern China），气候温暖（warm）, 准备轻便的衣服。（light clothes）②有很多美丽的风景，比如雁荡山（Yandang Moutains）和南麂岛（Nanji Island）等。③ 靠近大海，可以品尝海鲜（seafood）④交通方便⑤这里的人很友好,并且你很愿意做她的导游。
作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
In addition to, some people think English is superior than Chinese. In me opinion, though English is for great significance, but English is after all a foreign language. it is hard for people to see eye to eye. English do help us read English original works, but Chinese helps us learn a true China. Only by characters Chinese literature can send off its brilliance. Learning a country's culture, especial its classic culture, the first thing is learn its language. Because of we are Chinese, why do we give up our mother tongue and learn our owne culture through a foreign language?
