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1997年考研英语作文真题

发布时间:2013-05-20 18:27浏览次数:1562
要求:
Directions:
A. Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 120.
B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.
C. Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:
1. Interpret the following picture.
2. Predict the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons.
字数:120 满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

作者应适量增加从句的使用量;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;作者词汇量积累需要继续努力,尤其学术词汇还有很大提升空间,另外拼写检查还需加强;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

As is shown in the bar chart, the production of tabacco in the world shrink from 14.364 billon in 1994 to 14.2billion in 1955.According to the pie chart,smokers account for 20 percent among the world population,which brings chronic disaster for us.It costs 200 billion dollar in economy and approximate 3000 thousand person die from smoking-related disease. Confronted with this threat,people all walks of life try their best to limit cigaretts.On one hand,healthy experts warn public the threaten of smoking.On the other hand,governments set a series of laws to prohibit the production and cosume of tabaccon,increase the tax of tobacon and forbid smoking in public.More import,the whole public also take part in the governments acts. On the base of analyse above,we can predict the future tendency of tobacco confidently.With the development of economy and gradually change of lifestyle, there is no doubt that the cost tendency of cigarette,as the picture shows,will decrease.

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