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According to a latest news that lots of parents help their children deal with everything.It makes children lost partial inability to self-care.This will make against the grow of the kids.Because more and more Chinese Family have only one children.Parents have so much time and energy to help their children.They think it's good for their childrens' grow up.But in the fact,they get the contract result. In order to creat a nicer environment.As far as I am concerned,parents should give their children a freedom place.What's more,parents shoouldn't always give their hands when children faceto face a problem.Every should kown there will a day that you will meet all difficuclt and you must jump in and get your feet wet.It's improtant for parents that bring up a health life style for their children rather than help their children do everything.Because there is way that the children should go alone.
